The Official Writing Challenge
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This was an amusing tale, and I enjoyed the ending. My only suggestion is to use the number of years (to show the passage of time) rather than the number of months.
This made me smile really wide. The last line was epic! I loved it.

God bless~
I like your creative storytelling. Very humorous.too.

I do think you rambled a little bit getting to the real story, but I'm no expert.

I like your entry and thanks for sharing.
I don't know whether that could happen but it is "kinda" cute.

Weird thoughts come when we aren't think'n straight.

Keep thinking though and writing.
I thought the last line was cleaver. I may have separaed the dialog into separate sentences. This was creative.
I giggled all the way through this one. You have a great imagination and can tell a good story. Already said, but the last line was a winner.