The Official Writing Challenge
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12/10/15
This was an amusing tale, and I enjoyed the ending. My only suggestion is to use the number of years (to show the passage of time) rather than the number of months.
12/11/15
This made me smile really wide. The last line was epic! I loved it.

God bless~
12/11/15
I like your creative storytelling. Very humorous.too.

I do think you rambled a little bit getting to the real story, but I'm no expert.

I like your entry and thanks for sharing.
I don't know whether that could happen but it is "kinda" cute.

Weird thoughts come when we aren't think'n straight.

Keep thinking though and writing.
I thought the last line was cleaver. I may have separaed the dialog into separate sentences. This was creative.
12/16/15
I giggled all the way through this one. You have a great imagination and can tell a good story. Already said, but the last line was a winner.