The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked your ending.
Good content with good thoughts. The more we understand God's word, the more we understand God.

Keep looking at his word to explain life situations.
Good thoughts. I think you need to proofread more. There are a number of errors in punctuation, verbs, adverbs etc. For ex. in para. 4 it should be tugged, not tucked. In para. 7, see clearly. Your ideas are good. Just need to refine a bit.
Powerful message!

Thank you.

God bless~
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