The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a beautiful,poignant story. I loved it,from start to finish.
This is a touching reminiscence,with engaging sensory descriptions.
This is a beautiful story of love and bereavement. You did a wonderful job of capturing the MC's pain, but also is hope to be reunited one day in heaven. Lovely.
Congratulations, Dennis, on placing 2nd place in the Beginners category.

Your wife seems to be a wonderful woman. I liked your ending because it showed your future hope of seeing her.
Congratulations, Dennis, on winning a 5th place EC award.
Congratulations, Dennis, on your 5th place EC!
Congratulations, Dennis, on your EC for this touching and well-told story.
You crafted a multi faceted tale that was interesting from beginning to end.