The Official Writing Challenge
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Your vivid imagination was used well in writing this well written fiction piece. It shows what you can do.
01/23/17
Good message and I liked the humor you added to the story at the end. Nice job.
The authentic voice and pace make this a memorable read. Well done.
Well done. Good flow in the writing.
01/25/17
Thank you for your testimony- praise Jesus!! We are forgiven (frogiven). Heartfelt, inspirational & well written. God bless you.
01/26/17
Congratulations, Kristine, on your 1st place finish in the Beginners category.

It was so authentic that I thought it really was your testimony.

Make sure to double space between paragraphs for easier reading.

Keep writing; you have a real gift.
01/26/17
There must have been a glitch in the program this week; I just discovered that all entries are single spaced. Just ignore my comment if your spacing was correct.
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 12th overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards!
01/27/17
Wow! I also thought it was your testimony. What a well-written piece, that touches the heart.

Congratulations on your wins!! Welcome to the Intermediate category. Keep writing!

Blessings - Trudy
01/30/17
Wonderfully described journey of frogiveness ;). Congratulations on what I think will be the first of many winning entries.
02/01/17
Congratulations on winning 12th place overall!

I look forward to reading more of your work.