The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/17
This is an interesting article.
I would add a space between paragraphs to make your article easier on the eyes.
There are a couple of small typo's. For example, the 'O' in "Oh,..." should be capitalized. And you used quotation marks shortly after that that should be omitted.

Overall, a well written article.
Man looks on the outside, God looks on the inside. Therefore, we ought to be careful before branding people. Well done. Keep writing.
01/27/17
Joel - This is food for thought.

Good stuff here. With formating problems, everyone had difficulty this week. I did notice a few typos, though.

Thanks for sharing.

Every blessing - Trudy