The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/17
It was a very heart felt account of a purposeful life in Christ. I am not sure if it met the topic. Your sincerity was felt. It would be a nice devotional. I would like to see you add more white space, add some dialogue. It will keep the interest in the story. Hope this helps. God bless.
05/05/17
Wow! This is an amazingly well written story with a powerful message overall.

Well done!

Blessings~
05/12/17
Congratulations on your 1st place in the Beginners category and moving up to the Intermediate division, Marilyn.

The title summed up the piece nicely. Putting on the whole armor is essential for all of Christ's children.