The Official Writing Challenge
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I was very touched by this.
This one sure looks like a winner to me. Beautiful writing!
A very poignant story and very well written. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
I am at a loss for words. This was powerful and made my heart ache.

Amazing, realistic...and profound. Thank you.

God bless,

Beautifully told.
This is so beautiful. The rhymes and rhythm are perfect to my ear. We often need to be reminded of the things like water that we take for granted. You brought that concern to the forefront in a lovely and elegant way.
A most wonderful poem of heartbreaking reality. Beautifully written and great word choices. Love the ending of the poem.
Congratulations. God bless~