Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Hum (06/06/13)
- TITLE: All Stove Up
By Ramona Cook
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that what Trixie said as she
tried to think of something,
while words were swirling
in her head.
Writers block for her was not
a frequent situation;
but what on earth could be said
about such a word so void
Hum, like birds or, Hum like bees,
Hum, I sing and slap my knees?
Hum, I wonder what was said?
Hum, a song sung in my head?
Hum, I think this poem is great!
Oh, good grief just look and see
she has used the word repeatedly.
The guidelines say, "Don't do that!"
Write abstractly, not exactly.
Hum, this is too hard for me!
The first three letters of "humble"
give me no thoughts creatively;
I only know that humble is what I
ought to be. Some of my friends
have said it was their best quality.
Now here is my submission
and I hope that you don't mind;
and please, next week will you
give a word of a better kind?
Hum? Take care and I will too.
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