The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/13
This was an excellent read, and a well written story with a powerful message.

You did a fine job.

God bless~
10/13/13
Interesting, and intriguing, take on the topic. Division is such a struggle in the Church. Thanks for sharing!
It might have been interesting if you would have had the lead devil write the list on the clouds or had them repeat them after he read them, or even put them in wispy dreams they could float off into the night.

Unconsciously we do much injury with words but the worst time is when we mean it to hurt.

We need to take this to heart.