The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/13
Wow - this was such a sobering and prolific read. I was pulled in right away...and my heart was touched by this story.

Thank you for sharing your story with us.

God Bless you~
10/14/13
Wow. Your writing is so atmospheric - so vivid! I was sucked in and couldn't let go. Powerful!
Seems to me that Jim is the black sheep. Powerful story.
10/15/13
This story was heart-rendingly beautiful. Your writing has so much charisma!

Thanks!
10/16/13
I think your writing is awesome. Carried me through to the end with your powerful testimony. From one black sheep to another, I totally understand your story.

Many Blessings! Lynn
10/17/13
Steamy, powerful stuff. You have a gift for drawing the reader right into the situation with your clever word pictures. If this is a true story, then I admire your honesty. Great job.