The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/13
That Geico commercial with that pig is getting pretty famous!

Your entry was clever in its approach and different in content. It was an interesting piece that made me smile.

God bless~
Good writing comes first with a knowledge of subject. Good score on this.

Next is to keep reader interest. Another good score.

Also important is good layout of material. Nice paragraph structure so another good score.

The problem then comes from me. I got so involved in the read, I forgot to look for grammar and spelling. I hope your spell checker and grammar checker was working OK as I didn't catch any.

Keep putting 2 and 2 together to make a hit.
Keep on thinking and keep on writing -- you're on your way as a story teller. I enjoyed the read.