The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/14
Some of us have had similar experiences of going the wrong way, even when we have had directions that should have pointed us the right way. If we follow the teachings of Jesus and keep His commandments, we stand a good chance of going the right way. You have managed in your writing to give the reader a sense of your confusion as to which way to take. But you did end with the conviction that Jesus is the Way, the Truth and the Life.
02/14/14
I can relate to the "directions" story, I cannot read a map, and always get lost. But, I'm never lost with Jesus, and your story clearly demonstrates the same thing! This was so good!

Great job.

God bless~
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