The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful job of showing/telling "two different times" and "two different worlds" coming together as one.

I smiled reading this remembering those library catalogs,researching and walking along to find the books needed. It brought back a lot of wonderful memories.

Well written, authentic dialogue along with a tender relationship between the two MC's. Great job. I'm sure this will get the judge's attention!

God bless~
Good conversational story.

The young teaching the old.

This is what this critiquing is all about - teaching each other.

Again, I liked the way you told it.
What a fun interaction between Grandmother and grandson. I really liked how you showed there were two different ways to find information at the library.It was a very fun and light read. Great job!

RED INK: I didn't think you needed the piece in parentheses, because the stretched out "Grammaaaaa" already implied it, but that's just my thought.

Thanks for sharing! Good job on the topic.
Congrats! God bless~
I loved this article and found it very enjoyable! I will make a point to try to read them each week.

God Bless!