The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/14
Beautiful job of showing/telling "two different times" and "two different worlds" coming together as one.

I smiled reading this remembering those library catalogs,researching and walking along to find the books needed. It brought back a lot of wonderful memories.

Well written, authentic dialogue along with a tender relationship between the two MC's. Great job. I'm sure this will get the judge's attention!

God bless~
Good conversational story.

The young teaching the old.

This is what this critiquing is all about - teaching each other.

Again, I liked the way you told it.
What a fun interaction between Grandmother and grandson. I really liked how you showed there were two different ways to find information at the library.It was a very fun and light read. Great job!

RED INK: I didn't think you needed the piece in parentheses, because the stretched out "Grammaaaaa" already implied it, but that's just my thought.

Thanks for sharing! Good job on the topic.
04/24/14
Congrats! God bless~
I loved this article and found it very enjoyable! I will make a point to try to read them each week.

God Bless!