The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/14
Oh I really liked this! It was creative, well written and absolutely loved the ending! It wrapped up with a significant message and one that I'll use in the future if that's okay!

God bless~
Thank you for putting a name to my omnishambles! Clever writing.
This has a poetic feel to it. At times some of the rhymes were spot on. I struggled a bit in the beginning with trying to figure out just what message you were portraying, Try to get a good proofreader to help you catch little thing like bedroom being one word. You have a delightful sense of humor. Nice job.
Good job . . .

Congratulations!
Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV
I said it sideways - congratulations for writing a great story. Lost my focus for a mo . . .

Congratulations!
Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV