The Official Writing Challenge
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This was difficult to read due to the misplacement of commas, periods, and quotes. There is an option to review your writing before submitting.
I'm sorry to say I did not finish reading this. It got complicated with missing, added and incorrect punctuation. I can imagine that it would have been good if you had just paid attention to the details.

"Already paid" because of Jesus' sacrifice was the most powerful moment in this piece.

God bless~