The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/16
I enjoyed reading your fictionalized account of a blessed encounter with Christ. May you do well in the Challenge!
07/24/16
I liked the way you used the topic in this creative piece.
An interesting could be story of years ago. We know the Bible does not contain all the interactions of Jesus with the people of his time. When we can see thoughts and actions of people in a meeting with Jesus as well as the thoughts and action that portray Jesus, it makes us say, It could have been like this."

Nice writing.
07/25/16
Well written. Beautifully told. One of my favorites this week. Blessings.
07/28/16
Congratulations, Dennis, on your 4th place finish in the Intermediate category.

It was a good recreation of a meeting with Jesus during Bible times. The beginning was more telling than showing, but the middle to ending was well done.