The Official Writing Challenge
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08/04/16
I'm not a sci-fi fan, but I found this engaging. You did a great job in an offbeat way.
08/08/16
Wow! You got me with this one. Very creative use of the word eerie.

Well written. Thanks for sharing.
08/10/16
This is an original take on the topic. I was engaged from beginning to end. Well done.
I'm not a sci-fi geek but I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Well done and congrats on your win.
08/12/16
Like some others, sci-fi is not my thing. But your dialogue, character interaction and storyline elevated it to one great story. Great Job!
Awesome, Dennis! Congratulations on your 4th place EC!
08/13/16
This was good! I really enjoyed it. You used all the right terminology for a sci-fi story, so it was very believable, and I could easily visualise what was happening.
Very engaging throughout, and I liked the ending too... makes me wonder: if AI existed, how would God respond in a situation like this where they sacrificed themselves for his creation? Well done.
08/27/16
Wow what a great story. You packed much depth and action into your entry.

Congratulations on your EC palcing and level win.