The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this story...great job!
Great story and well written.
Great Story!

God Bless!
We all at times need a reminder to 'not grown weary from doing
good'. Clever. Well done.
Hello Sarah, Your entry has been highlighted in our Someone to Watch showcase (posted in the forums, on Facebook, and on Twitter). Keep rising to the Challenge! Deb (FaithWriters and Breath of Fresh Air Press)
Should have left a link to the post on Facebook. Hope you get more readers and feedback.
A great story, well told. Congratulations on being Deb's Publisher's Choice pick. You've done a great job with this. I really liked the ending as I was a bit concerned that it was losing realism (even though I believe in angels). I should have read the title!
Great story. Nothing helps me more than having coffee with a good listener. Keep up the good work!!
So very well written! The narrative flowed towards a perfect ending. Loved how you applied what I've called the Picasso Rule. "Learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist."

Congratulations for the Blue Ribbon and Deb's choice. Well deserved. I predict that it won't be long before you're in Level 4. :-)
Great story! Congratulations!
I hardly know what to say. While I'm not a wife, and never will be, you gave us a birds eye view of what women go through.

I'm not one for grammar. I want writing to communicate how people feel in real life situations. You did that to most on a masterful level.

Keep of the writing.