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Powerful. Honest. Touching.
Thank you for writing this, and sharing it with us.

God bless,

Kevin
08/24/06
What I like - this is beautiful. I LOVE the comparison...I love your word choices. Love your ending. Made me think and isn't that what we want the reader to do?

What I might change - nothing at all. You said it all very clearly.
08/26/06
This is very, VERY powerful and extremely effective. I love the way you parallel for first crosses with the "true" one. This is just wonderful.
08/28/06
Excellent writing. I loved this. In Christ's Love,

Julia
08/30/06
You should have lots more comments. This piece gave me chills when I got to the last paragraph. I thought it was absolutely wonderful. Excellent, excellent work.