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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/07
Nice allegory. The feel was part Indiana Jones, part video game.
06/01/07
Wonderful and true message in this clever allegory! :)
Nice use of symbolism in this allegorical adventure. It is well-written and held my attention with its suspense.
06/02/07
I enjoyed the suspense woven through this adventure! You captured my attention and held it!
This is a different approach to adventure. Very good. Very well told.
06/03/07
Well done. I enjoyed the narrative as well as the message of the story.
06/03/07
Loved the suspense and allegory, a nice combination.
06/03/07
Very nice allegory - I love how you put us right in the middle of it with the very first paragraph.
06/04/07
This is great! Would love to see this made into a short movie for youth groups.
I enjoyed this adventurous allegory very much. Good job!
06/06/07
Great allegory. Wonderful visual of our struggles with temptation. You had me wanting to continue reading from the first line. Good job.
This is like a modern-day, alternate verson of Pilgrim's Progress. Very fun. I enjoyed reading it. The dialouge was real and the message was clear. Excellent.
***Congrats!***
06/07/07
Very good!
06/13/07
Congratulations on your third place. Very well deserved.
06/13/07
My heart was racing from the beginning!