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Well presented reality Christians face after leaving Hinduism. Good dialogue.
Your piece was very informative and enjoyable to read.
02/23/09
I love the open ending!
02/24/09
A touching, heartfelt story. Well done.
02/24/09
Realistic and well-written. Good work.
02/24/09
A good reminder that some converts make a much bigger decision when they know their families will disown them if they choose Christ. Good writing!
02/24/09
I enjoyed this. I liked how you wove in the culture/beliefs so well.
02/25/09
Great story! I liked this intimate look into what it's like to be an Indian believer. My only suggestion for improving this piece: there's a lot of explanations mixed in with the dialogue, which kind of stalls the story a bit....keeping the dialogue moving will hold the reader's attention. You do capture the emotions well. Nice job!
Well told story of something so terribly sad.
Norms