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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/09
This was an interesting take on the topic, but I felt the execution was a bit choppy. The italicized parts felt a bit stiff, not like the flow of thoughts within someone's head, and the postscripts left me with a lot of questions. As I said, though, the concept was unique and intriguing, and the opening line definitely caught my attention.