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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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Great tie-in to the theme, Grrr!
02/07/10
This is lovely. Some Grr-s are needed for sure.
02/07/10
Really enjoyed the last four lines, would like the rest to be on that level. Keep writing.
02/08/10
Well done.Good title too.
Such beautiful poetry. You did a brilliant job of retelling a Bible Story. This would be perfect for a Sunday School class to read and act out for the church. Job well done.
Beautiful! I could picture everything with your word choices and the rhyme and meter was like a soothing song.
Nice tie-in to our hearts being His temple, great message. Love the storytelling in this poem.
02/12/10
Beautifully written with a great message for us all. Congratulations on ranking in your level. Have you checked out the Challenge Forums?