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You did a good job with the dialect, maybe too good as I had to reread a couple of passages. But it was a well-told story with a great sense of humor. The last line was particularly good, it brought a vivid picture to my mind.
I enjoyed the characters you created here and your strong dialogue. Great job.
I totally enjoyed the Texas drawl and phraseology! I could just see the old guy in your story. :) I hope Old Dynamite gets oats in his bin soon. :)