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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/10
This is really good. I love your making connection and contrast between physical sight and genuine insight. I would like to know more about Bridie's solution for keeping her baby safe.

Actually, leaving your reader wanting more is insightful! :)
This is a well written and powerful message. I noticed a tiny typo you wrote pride instead of proud, but that is easily fixed. I really like how you brought home your points in the second half. The title is a perfect fit.
I love the message of this entry! Proverbs has much to say about the discerning heart, and God's Word giving light to the eyes. Beautifully Biblical devotional.
08/04/10
This devotional has a great message. Some of the sentences felt a little long. Try reading a story out loud to feel the pacing. Overall, very well done.