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04/28/11
This is very engaging. I wondered if perhaps they are sisters because of the comment on exchanging cards on the aniversary of the death of their parents. How easy to get caught up in excelling at the things the world rewards.
05/01/11
Love the relentless build-up as you switch between these two characters on your way to the denouement. Very well constructed story.
05/01/11
A great reminder that we should pursue things with eternal value while on earth, and not the praise and accolades of men! Outstanding job! God bless!