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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
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Excellent in every way. Great job showing the MC's inner turmoil and turning point. Very good storytelling!
You made my heart ache with the torment of her temptation! The character handled the temptation through the overcoming power of Christ; a good lesson in how to handle such things.

The character 'lived' in the reading. Good job--I felt her conflict and rejoiced in her choice!
The loving devotion of your characters made me think of my aunt, now 88 years old. Married after 4 months of dating. Was told it would never last. 63 years later, still madly in love, my uncle went to Heaven.

I wasn't expecting the story to lead to a near catastrophic choice. Thank God your character saw the invisible shield that protected the integrity of her committment. Your wording is quite good.
Fantastic job. The commitment was clearly stated, and the story was enjoyable. Nicely done.

God Bless~
Whew! This one had me holding my breath until the very end, hoping for a happy ending. So glad Ellie made the right choice. Good job! God bless!
I really enjoyed this gripping tale. Loneliness can cause havoc on a heart. You did a great job with the topic. Small red ink wain is a truck often found on a farm. I think you wanted the verb wane. :)
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