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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
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10/25/12
Loved the last line, that said it all. Thanks.
God bless~
10/26/12
I absolutely loved Doris. She reminded me of an amazing woman, also named Doris, that I had in my life years ago. She was my bible teacher and was there for me in some of the roughest years of my life. Great story with a great message. Thanks for writing this.

God bless!
Wow this is stunning from the title to the very last word. I think showing the two POV was a touch of genius. Yes we say things and try to mean them but the peek into the older woman's thoughts were quite revealing. I truly enjoyed this piece and it tugged at me for more reasons than I sometimes care to admit.