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03/01/13
J'adore this, totally and completely. Wow! What super work. I could hear "His soft 'Chérie', his 'Chocolat." The poor woman didn't stand a chance, and yet the ending brought him to his senses. You put me into their story and I'm enjoying the silky smooth accent. Très bien!
03/02/13
Ooh la la...A memorable entry for sure. Nicely done, told and right on topic.

God bless~
03/04/13
Bull's Eye. Nice shot at the target. Good cadence and repitition of the key thought. Tragic mistake of so many who fall for the charm.
03/04/13
Your poem is so well crafted. Just beautiful. God bless.
Enthralling. This is beyond beautiful. Need I say I love it?
I haven't read a real fanciful love poem like this in a while. I loved the whole thing. I was so hoping they were going to be that perfect match. Your MC was right, was a scoundrel! Thanks so much for writing this delightful peace. Blessings...