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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this story. A very creative interpretation of the topic.
Lovely story. Loved all the little details and the way you rounded it off at the end. Especially the last line. Great writing and good take on the topic.
Oh I really liked this well written story. Nicely done, and nicely told.

God Bless~
Oh, this warmed my heart straight down to my toes. Especially the lines about "Fish out of Water" and thene that flirtatious smile of Alicia's. Very fine writing here, sir. I thought you had moved to Master' level. That's where you belong, anyway. Blessings...
I love to fish so thoroughly enjoyed your well written story. Note: it should be "jon boat" rather than "John boat" though they are pronounced the same. Well done.
Your descriptions take me right there - both places. A most delightful read. I miss fishing, but I do not miss the worms nor the gaspings. Sometimes we tossed bits of Velveeta Cheese into the lake as an apology for our injurious intrusion.
The soft, gentle descriptions of a day fishing on a quiet lake were right on and very enjoyable. I did get a little jolted when you went from the boy's point of view to the grandfathers in the first few paragraphs. But overall, nice take on the topic and a really good story.
Congratulations Sheldon!

God Bless~
Congrats on your HC! I knew it was a winner!
Congratulations on placing 5th in your level and 14 overall! (the highest rankings can be found on the message boards)