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10/31/14
Wonderful writing in this piece. Good job. I always enjoy the entries that have biblical references and retellings.

Well done.

God bless~
11/02/14
I really enjoyed reading these from the POV of a stowaway! Great writing - thanks for sharing.
This is quite clever. I had many guesses about what might happen, but they were all wrong. I love it when I don't see the ending coming. I've never thought about what this may look like from afar. The only red ink was the word agape should be one word, not two. That's a tiny typo that I'm sure you spotted once it was too late. I'd encourage you to explore this POV more. I think it would make a thrilling teen Sunday School take home sheet. You could do a series of them from this unique POV. Congratulations on ranking 7th in level 3! Happy Dance!