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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/14
Oooh! This was different and creative. It was short but made quite an impact for the reader.


God bless~
11/09/14
A little grisly for the Christian faint of heart, but your point was well made. Good use of descriptive language and pacing in this short story.
A clever story. Macabre, yet with powerful imagery. I was distracted by the abrupt change in POV mid-way through. Good effort, though.