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A lovely message and so relevant to marriage.

The red ink I have is to make the intro a bit smoother. The vision section read beautifully, and the difference between the two parts was the description and how the vision section flowed, whereas the intro felt more choppy.

That said, I liked this piece a lot and it has inspired me to think how I can make prayer and Bible sharing more of a priority in my own marriage. Thank you x
12/08/14
There is so much beauty in the vision God gave you. Both for the here and now and for eternity. Such a wonderful reminder that good things we sow into our marriages now, we will reap in the blessing for eternity. Well done!
12/12/14
I should have made it clear that this is a true story, all of it. I pray it will be a blessing to someone.