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02/19/15
Excellent and well written entry with a powerful close!
Amen...stay in His word.

God bless~
I truly enjoyed this. You have a wonderful sense of humor and I found myself snickering throughout the entire read. You took a fresh approach to the topic and I appreciated that.

The only red ink I might offer would have been to make it actually look like something in the paper. Put a headline in bold print and the date and the name of the paper up in the header. Instead of just using the person's name, write it out like it would be in the paper. For example, John Smith said, ... Others had similar opinions such as Lucy Los who had this to say on the topic :
That's not perfect by any means, but I hope it helps show what I mean.

I do think you did a great job with it. I always especially enjoy out-of-the-box stories and you definitely wrote a story different from any other that I read. I also liked your examples from the Bible. You did a great job of expressing your message without coming off as preachy. Did I mention I love your humor? I'm still smiling.
What a terrific idea! My hubby and I actually started a pamphlet ministry years ago entitled "The Straight Gate". We even had three and a half printing presses in the garage. Grow with the idea . . .
02/26/15
Congrats!

God BLess~
03/22/15
I loved your originality in this, and your great use of scripture. Thanks for all your hard work, and congratulations!