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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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10/14/16
A reminder to all of us who follow Christ and sometimes get so wrapped up in our own problems we forget to look out for those around us who are struggling. Helping them will also help us. Thanks for the reminder.
This is an intense piece. I like how your sentence size and pacing represented the overload. Then in the middle, the pacing changes, and the reader senses some tension. I like what you wrote and the implications in what you didn't write, but more how you wrote it. You made a strong argument and almost demand the reader examine her own heart. Very artistic and interesting.