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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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12/12/19
I must be feeling especially emotional today because this made me cry. Great writing. Thanks for sharing. God bless.
12/12/19
The gravity of war weighs heavily on the hearts of so many.Many innocent lives lost for the deeds of those with evil intentions.

Great storytelling and thought provoking piece.

There was a double I in one sentence and a couple of sentences with formatting issues, but these did not distract from my reading of the story.
Wow- such a powerful story. I hope this places. Well done!
12/13/19
My heart ached while reading this. Great storytelling and writing. The double "I" only caused a slight stumble in my reading, but I was so intrigued by the story that I kept right on going. Keep up the good work. This is a moving story that gave a very different angle to look at a beach from.
I want to apologize to the readers for the II and some minor formatting issues.

Due to a computer glitch, the story that I had spent several minutes formatting disappeared when I hit submit.

Since I had only 4 minutes left, I must have hit an extra I instead of space bar. I also had several spots that I had italized.
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www.7 Minutes To Live:The Extraordinary Story of D-Day was the resource that I used.

Thank you for all of your comments. I appreciate the feedback.
12/13/19
Vivid, heartbreaking entry about the realities of war.

The first sentence threw me a little bit since it made it sound like he was on the beach. When I learned he was on the ship, I wondered how he'd have time or focus to notice a single body washing up on the beach. Maybe a just needed a better placement descriptor for where the boat was in relation to the beach.

Otherwise, very well done.
12/14/19
Powerful story and well-written.
12/14/19
Powerful!!!
12/19/19
Congratulations on placing 1st in your division and 3rd overall, Loni. Powerful reminder of the sacrifice of the men and women who serve.
12/19/19
Congratulations on placing 1st in your division and 3rd overall, Loni. Powerful reminder of the sacrifice of the men and women who serve.
12/19/19
Congratulations on placing 1st in your division and 3rd overall, Loni. Powerful reminder of the sacrifice of the men and women who serve.
12/20/19
Congrats on your EC. Well done. :)