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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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Creative approach, great use of slang and twists on phrases. Nicely done.
Very clever approach to this week's challenge. I enjoyed the humor.

In one sentence, you changed the pronoun from him to her by mistake.

You well described all the action and I could see it all play out.
Very nicely done! Loved your slanty twist with the baseball metaphors for life on the narrow path.
This was so clever and I really enjoyed it. You needed to proofread however -- a few mistakes. But good writing!