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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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good work! i enjoyed your poem very much.
Please post more of your poems at Poetry and Poets of God:
Beautiful. I admire the way you can tell a story in such a masterful way. I love the conclusion too.
On topic and nice to see a poem that tells a story. I'm timid about writing poetry with longer lines, but good for you for going for it.
Excellent! The story is complete, it flows well, the meter and rhyme are great! Awesome! :)
This poem has such a lyrical quality to it. I enjoyed how it read and the story behind it. :^)
This one flowed very well ... a nice meter and good word selection. Well done!