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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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So very precious - isn't it wonderful to see the fruit of our labors in children.

You've probably already noticed, but it looks like a bit of your story, near the bottom, got lost somehow :( Hate that!
I still loved it.
I like your kids. This is sweet, and well written. Kudos.
This is a sweet and precious story.
Lovely story. The title was great for a camping story.
Awww, sweet story. I'd love to see just a little more showing and a little less telling in the beginning explanation, but fun story!
I love burnt marchmallows:) This was a cute story. Great job!
As sweet as marchmallows! Dear and lovely story. Children are so cute and innocent and you captured the way they talk and think beautifully. (I just made some marchmallows last week-yum!)