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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/07
Now, there's a hook! Very, VERY creative take on the topic, and wonderful characterization. What a situation. A great read.
12/08/07
Great opening sentence! I like that you kept Suzie's voice going until the end so that I wasn't sure if I trusted her until the final sentences. Makes me wonder what happened to a lady who conned people at a church I attended years ago....
Yours is a clever approach to the topic. I thought the group's solution was bold, yet compassionate. You give much food for thought.
12/09/07
Lovely redeemption story. Very nice.
Very creative with a great voice for your MC
12/14/07
Love the mental I have of your MC pressing a glass to the bathroom door to eavesdrop on the group's consensus!

Congratulations!
12/14/07
Congratulations on your EC. This is a very creative take on the topic. Very good dialogue. Nice job.