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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
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09/11/08
Ouch, ouch, ouch! Great story.
09/12/08
Nice twist! Love the ending. Great take on the topic!
09/13/08
This is great! I love the turnabout/fair play ending! :)
09/13/08
Love the baseball image, and the tit-for-tat. Well done.
09/14/08
Oh, this is FABULOUS. Great analogy, and a SUPER unexpected twist. LOVE this one.
09/16/08
Can I just add that I love the irony in this, "Mr. Strickland adjusted his lavender tie, then turned and placed both hands on the wall between two fancy framed diplomas.
Ouch! This is a great story. I loved the ending. Very good writing. Nice job.
Fantastic story and congratulations on you win! Excellent!!
09/18/08
Congrats Jason, on your editor's choice placing. This was one of my favorites this week.
09/19/08
Congratulations on your Editor's Choice! Great job!
09/20/08
This was soooo good! LOL! Congrats...