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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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04/01/11
Oh, I like this!

The rhythm was good, except for the first few lines of the third stanza. They threw me for loop. (Though somewhat appropriate for your poem, I don't think it was your intention. ;))

This we very fun, and extremely creative!