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This is a beautiful poem. I love the unforced rhymes. There were many excellent phrases; I especially like the second stanza (debris-destruction-death-despair) and the fifth (foretold birth pains getting stronger). The entire poem works quite well.
Thankyou for such a wonderful poem and for so accurately portraying the devastation of the recent terrible news. I particularly love your last verse.
03/19/11
My heart also breaks for the Japanese right now. Beautiful!
Very moving and excellently written. Thank you for this tribute.
This is a lovely tribute to all those who were lost in Japan or any natural disaster. May we never forget