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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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Good, natural dialogue with genuine warmth and wit flowing throughout. throwing in a bit of teaching helped the cause as well. And I did enjoy Greg's hum-ble apology.
We can all relate to writer's block, but you may not have heard that I once wrote a book about it. The easiest thing I've ever done because every page was blank ;-)
Very enjoyable story. I was humming right along with your characters by the end.
Loved this. Its a favorite scripture song, and one worth humming! Good writing.
I like the way you've written this, centred around two people and two rooms. I can visualise Amy in the details. I know someone just like her. And you brought Greg's character to life with his irritability and the cake crumbs. Nice one!
Congratulations in ranking 26 overall!
I can relate to Amy, I've had songs and verses going around in my head at times too. I completely enjoyed your creatively-written story.