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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm not qualified to critique poetry, because I know not of what I speak :), but I enjoyed it.

Thank you for sharing it.
So powerful and "punchy." In all honesty, not crazy about the title, but I have no suggestions for you - and it could be me.
Great message - interesting interaction. Good use of rhyming words . . .
This exposes us to the contrast between our own hesitance to ask for forgiveness and Jesus' desire to grant it - all in such simple terms. Great work.
I really enjoyed your poem. It flowed along effortlessly and your first stanza was completely convicting.
I do not critique poetry, but I know what I like and I like it.

Tremendous message. Thanks for sharing.
Loved it! You make rhyming come so easily. Enjoyed this conversation with Jesus immensely. Very well done.
Simply beautiful! Wow.

God bless~