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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the last line. It really pops, providing an excellent context and conclusion to your well crafted story.
An interesting tale of which I enjoyed reading from start to finish.

God bless~
Oh, I like this. Always be prepared and bring extra. :) I like the unique POV you chose for this story. It gave it a different "flavor."
Great "way it could have went down" story. And told well.

Thanks for sharing this.
Love the descriptive, totally credible treatment of this 'parallelable.' Great job.
My favorite kind of story is a well done Bible "retelling". You certainly did this one expertly!
I enjoyed your cleverly constructed telling of this parable. Your unique style never disappoints me.
Love it.
Congratulations for ranking 24 overall!