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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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Very different. It took a moment to grasp the concept, but I finally settled in. Maybe it was just me, but I found it a little choppy. I couldn't find a good flow. But don't fret, I'm no good with poetry. Keep on writing and entering. Apologies for no one else commenting yet!
I like the way you showed the progression through the years of the togetherness of a couple, shown only through their walk, by an unknown observer.
Brilliant job with the topic. Well done, and excellent approach to the topic!

God bless~