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I enjoyed the imagery and descriptions in this thoughtful, fun-to-read tale.
10/25/14
This is certainly right on topic! LOL. Exquisite writing-- I've said so many times this week--t a fan of this genre but I'm enjoying the writing so much.

GOd bless~
Delightfully delicious . . .
Loving you in and through and because of the Christ, Judi
1 Timothy 3:16 KJV
10/28/14
Very colourful and descriptive, with a lot of fun thrown in. All the food and especially the sandwiches sound as if they're triton true, so I wonder could jupiter recipe or two from the restaurant menu in your next entry?
The descriptions are superb in this delightful sci-fi story, and your humor at the end is perfect. Definitely, a winner for me!
I loved the ending! Great story, thank you for sharing.
10/29/14
Ha Ha Ha!
My imagination wondered what kind of pest might thre be on Jupiter's moon - but that mystery just added to this fun story.
Congratulations on ranking 17 overall! Happy Dance!