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11/06/14
Great message in this tale, loved the ending.

The title was significant.

Well done.

God bless~
11/12/14
I'm glad this had a happy ending. It's a good reminder that too often we jump to wrong conclusions about people.

I think your story would be stronger if you used more action and dialogue to show your characters opinions.

It's a great theme that we should all learn a lesson from.