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01/15/15
Oh I really like this piece. At first, the opening quatrain didn't click with me. But then as I read it through a second time it meshed much better.

I had copied my favorite stanzas to tell you about, but then decided my favorite was this one instead: "Recognize the lure that brightly dangles
Underneath the glitz are lies that mangle
And hopes that die a sorry death
Because they float on Satanís breath"

It has a good cadence and depth of meaning. Great work!
01/16/15
Great job! Well done.

God bless~
This is perfect. What a delight to read. You nailed the heart of the topic while covering the many ways one can lust. Congratulations on ranking 17 overall! Happy Dance!